Will it work?

For our thriller opening sequence, Georgie and I again presented idea to three of the department's producers.  Based on what they've fed back to us, our idea has altered slightly. Below is our slightly adjusted concept;
 
-to film the bedroom sequence in a actual bedroom rather than a studio (this makes a lot of sense as it would save time and would be cost effective considering this is a boarding school).
 

Overall, they found our 'film noir investigation' based idea to be interesting and relatively easy to execute allowing us to focus on filming and edit to the best of our abilities. This is encouraging for us in this stage of pre-production.